
ACT II: THE ECHO IN THE SAWMILL
The trail narrowed into a tunnel of cedar and shadow. Sunlight flickered in thin, nervous beams through the canopy, never fully settling on the forest floor. By 9:10 AM, Jacob and Lina had reached the first sign of the abandoned mill — a sagging fence post wrapped in coils of barbed wire, each barb rusted the color of old blood.
The forest seemed to inhale as they stepped past it.
“Smells like oil,” Jacob murmured.
“Oil… and something else,” Lina said, raising her camera. The air was thick with a metallic tang, sharp enough to taste. Each breath carried the faintest echo of old machinery: clanks, whirs, rhythmic pounding — like a heartbeat forged from steel. But when they paused, the sounds vanished.
Ahead, the sawmill loomed like a corpse of timber and iron. Crushed roofs bowed under decades of storms. Conveyor belts hung shredded from cracked rafters. The great cutting wheel — once the pride of Coldwater Valley — sat half-buried in earth, teeth still wicked despite years of rot.
Lina pointed her lens. “If the foundation is unstable, we should stay outside—”
A low vibration rippled under their feet. Jacob crouched, touching the ground.
“Feels like… footsteps,” he whispered.
Except they were alone.
Lina swallowed hard. “Let’s get our shots and leave. Twenty minutes max.”
They moved slowly around the mill. Weeds rustled at their ankles. The air thickened.
Then Jacob froze.
“Lina… look.”
On the northern wall of the main structure, hidden under collapsed beams, someone had carved deep gouges into the old siding. Not letters — shapes. Circles intersecting with jagged lines. Symbols that looked almost mechanical in design, yet desperate, carved with force, perhaps fear.
“These weren’t here twenty years ago,” Lina said. “They’re… fresh.”
Jacob raised his flashlight. “But who would—”
A cracking branch snapped somewhere behind them.
Not close.
Not far.
Following.
Lina grasped Jacob’s sleeve. “Maybe it’s a deer.”
Jacob didn’t move. “A deer doesn’t stalk.”
They turned toward the sound.
Nothing but trees.
Nothing but the breath of wind.
Nothing but—
A metallic clang erupted from inside the mill.
Lina gasped. “Something’s in there.”
Jacob steadied himself. “Crowe said the place collapses with a strong wind. We’re not going in.”
“We might not have to,” she whispered.
Because the mill door — a warped slab of timber fused with rusted iron hinges — began to shift. Slowly. Groaning under its own weight.
Someone pushed it from inside.
Jacob’s pulse hammered. “Stay behind me.”
The door creaked open an inch.
Then two.
Then wide enough for darkness to spill out like ink.
Out of that blackness, something tumbled onto the dirt floor — rolling, clattering, stopping at Jacob’s boots.
Lina’s scream tore the silence.
It was a helmet.
Not a miner’s helmet.
Not any kind of safety gear.
It was iron.
Thick.
Heavy.
Welded shut.
Jacob knelt, hands trembling. There were scratch marks on the inside — frantic, deep grooves that clawed toward the sealed seam. He recoiled, bile rising.
“That’s not old,” he whispered. “This wasn’t buried. This… this was worn.”
Lina backed away, tears fighting to surface. “We need to go. Now.”
Another sound drifted from the doorway.
A slow, dragging scrape.
Like metal sliding across concrete.
Jacob rose, sweat chilling on his spine. “Run.”
But before they could move, a shadow stretched across the dirt — long, distorted, shifting with a jerking motion that suggested the figure was not moving naturally.
Lina stepped back, whispering, “Jacob…?”
But Jacob wasn’t looking at the shadow.
He was looking at the tree line behind them.
The white forestry Jeep was back.
Officer Daniel Crowe stood beside it.
Watching them.
Expression blank.
Unblinking.
Like he had been waiting the entire time.
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